Standing Ovation

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This woman
Deserves a standing ovation
So rise to your feet

I could never think of a better way
To thank her
For the trouble she has been through
With me

Going BEYOND the extra mile
To have me feeling my best

Tending to me at my bedside
When I became ill or endured killer cramps

Praising me when I succeed
Standing up when I'm deceived

Encouraging me and also reminding me
To be myself and live my life

I could never think of a better way
To thank her
For the trouble she has been through with me

This woman
Deserves a standing ovation
So rise to your feet





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EdytD said...
Aug. 24, 2009 at 8:28 pm
This is great! I particularly liked the repetition of the first two/last two paragraphs. Nice!
 
Ramna said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 2:30 pm
Nice job. Your words hide an amazing sense of inspiration.
Please read my work and comment.
 
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