A Blurred Reality

The sweetest scent can be...So hard to take in...In and hold...Hold it in your lungs.

Resisting was the best feeling on winter days. I should have gone away. My breaths are so long. All while we shook along.

Take it in and hold, hold it in your lungs.

The TV was the best thing on. Never took a look at what was wrong. Drooling time is sure to come...Nothing is wrong. It's our time to chew the gum.

Take it in and hold, hold it in your lungs.

Some things are wrong. I need to stop...Several times. Maybe I took too long. Body sweats and coughing stops. Lost in forgetting who I was.

Take it in and hold, hold it in your lungs.





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musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 2:50 am
Woah. COOL! I really like it, it is a brilliant piece of work which makes me think and, it's so cool!
 
Hannahbear replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:32 pm
ya...i agree wit music. it really makes you think, which i appreciate...it takes a good writter to make a reader think about what they are reading. keep writing k? ;)
 
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