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Saddened my pounding heart,
Fallen my hopes and dreams.
Crushed my hard work, soiled...
Tarnished my tight sewn seams.

Abide the broken powers,
Of which we must obey;
Fall into the river,
The river of our dismay.

Flee the unfortunate souls,
Who shudder in the cold night air.
Follow every sweet, sound noise,
For every rule can not be fair.

So heal my pounding heart,
Return my hopes and dreams.
Earn my hard work back again,
Gleam, my tight sewn seams.



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xximjustmexx said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 3:22 pm
Very good. I loved it. Can you please vote and comment on my poems?
 
WonderDreamer23 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:00 pm
i TOTALLY GET THAT i actually do! not joking hahahah thanks again im just typing now!!!!!!!
 
Brittany=)This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 10:49 pm
Very Deep.
 
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