Immature Love

July 9, 2009
By ScreenName2014 GOLD, West Chester, Ohio
ScreenName2014 GOLD, West Chester, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Do not look back and grieve over the past, for it is gone. And do not be troubled about the future, for it has not yet come. Live in the present and make it so beautiful that it will be worth remembering. - Ida Scott Taylor


When I looked into your eyes,
I couldn’t help but be surprised.
That I could see into your soul,
And that I couldn’t control…
The way I feel about you,
The way I feel tonight.
I’ve got so many emotions running through my head,
And it feels like I’m about to take flight.
I know I sound cliché,
But my heart starts racing, every time you say my name.
Love wasn’t something that I thought I would find,
But now that you’re here, you’re a permanent part of my life.
I know I sound like a teen,
And I know you think that I’m immature,
But once you’ve experienced the love and passion that I have,
You will know that I’m sure.
About the way I feel about you,
The way I feel tonight.
I’ve got so many emotions running through my head,
And it feels as if I’m about to take flight.


The author's comments:
I am originally a song writer, not a poet, but its kind of hard to get published when you're young. So this is an easy way to bear my soul so people can see who I really am.

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on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:55 am
ScreenName2014 GOLD, West Chester, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Do not look back and grieve over the past, for it is gone. And do not be troubled about the future, for it has not yet come. Live in the present and make it so beautiful that it will be worth remembering. - Ida Scott Taylor

Thank you!

on Jul. 28 2009 at 6:40 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I really like this poem...in fact i love it! Its so true and i can relate to every line. Nice work!




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