Immature Love

July 9, 2009
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When I looked into your eyes,
I couldn’t help but be surprised.
That I could see into your soul,
And that I couldn’t control…
The way I feel about you,
The way I feel tonight.
I’ve got so many emotions running through my head,
And it feels like I’m about to take flight.
I know I sound cliché,
But my heart starts racing, every time you say my name.
Love wasn’t something that I thought I would find,
But now that you’re here, you’re a permanent part of my life.
I know I sound like a teen,
And I know you think that I’m immature,
But once you’ve experienced the love and passion that I have,
You will know that I’m sure.
About the way I feel about you,
The way I feel tonight.
I’ve got so many emotions running through my head,
And it feels as if I’m about to take flight.





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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2009 at 6:40 pm
I really like this poem...in fact i love it! Its so true and i can relate to every line. Nice work!
 
ScreenName2014 replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 11:55 am
Thank you!
 
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