Rising

July 19, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~


3
2
1
we're off
he leans in, i
lose my breath
he brushes my cheek
with his hand
blood pumps to my cheeks
i lean my head on his
chest, and he steals my heart
i replace it with his
the moon crwons us with cryptic
wonder, setting us ablaze
with life
his smile brings my soul to the
surface and he whisks it
away, hiding it from the harmful
world around us
he saved me
he protects me
the forest takes us away to
be its new life,
the clearing dissapearing


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on Jan. 5 2010 at 4:03 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

ya i know i have some spelling problems, i always do. i didnt know that you could copy and paste...ugh but anyway thanks sooo much!

Andrnick said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 10:01 pm
I love it but it was kind of weird with the stealing of the heart from a guy but it's excellent.

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:12 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

thanks a lot!!! thnks for checking out so much of my work, i really appreciate it!!!

on Nov. 15 2009 at 8:40 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments
I think this is one of the best of your poems! It; svery meaningful...I was feeling my heart squeeze while reading it. 5 stars!

mandygale77 said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 11:48 am
I loved the emotion and description you put into that. It's really great. You have some spelling problems throughout, but generally it's really good.




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