Time.

July 23, 2009
By Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
18 articles 17 photos 49 comments

Time;
is moving us forward
but also moving us back.

is changing us for the better
but also for the worst.

is giving us the best
but also the bad.

is making us who we are
but also showing us who we're not.

is bringing us new things
but also saving the old.

is healing us
but also making new wounds.

is taking people from us
but also bringing so many more to us.

is fading.
is turning.
is coming to an end.



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tor10jax GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 1:45 am
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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I like this poem and how it shows the positive and the negative of time (the paradoxes, too). I feel like it could use some specific examples or more emotion. Besides for that, great job.

Keep writing!

Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 1:13 am
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
18 articles 17 photos 49 comments
^_^ Haha thanks... I didn't mean to but I kinda uploaded it twice T.T and Idk how to delete a post... OH WELL.. Again thanks :)))

on Jul. 27 2009 at 3:49 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I really like this poem. It reminds me of one i wrote. And its very true. Awesome work!




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