He walks in, she stares

July 23, 2009
By crutledge08 SILVER, Caldwell, Idaho
crutledge08 SILVER, Caldwell, Idaho
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He walks in, she stares,
He says, "Hi," she glares.
He asks, "what?" She walks.
He follows as he talks.
She wont cave,
But he's being brave.
He steps in front of her,
trying to see through her eyes.
The bell rings,
They say their goodbyes.
He takes her out to pronounces his love,
as beautiful and romantic as a dove.
he gets on one knee, she knows what he's going to do,
She looks into his eyes and says,
"I love you too."

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on Jul. 29 2009 at 9:01 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Ahwww! i love it! Its so sweet.

Great job!

Amber1994 GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 9:34 pm
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
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great! im not a big fan of rhyming poems, i prefer ones with a story behind it or written emotion. But i have to say i enjoyed this one. -check out my poems and comment!-


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