Driving Rain

July 21, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~


My insides were filled with a
driving rain
a driving salt-filled rain
tearing at my insides
at the mere sound of his name being
spoken aloud
his ungodly name
my heart was a rusted
iron rod beacuse of the rain
the maddening, immoble, unstopping
RAIN!!!
and the rain was because him,
the disgusting
not even human,
creature


The author's comments:
I love to read and write, and i love looking at art, even though i can't draw. when i grow up i hope to be an author, pshychologist, or work with autistic children.

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on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:58 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

wow, thats a cool way of descibing it! i like that discription, or however you spell it, whatever. anyway, thanks!!!!

on Nov. 16 2009 at 7:58 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments
Yes, I know. It's angrily beautiful =P

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:15 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

thats wat is meant to be

on Nov. 15 2009 at 8:30 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments
Wow, this sure is an angry poem. The ugly side of love.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 4:22 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

my boyfriend broke up with me and i just wanted to hit something but at the same time i felt like bawling and this is what my heart felt like, thanks for checking out so many of my poems and stuff. :)

LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:47 am
I didn't get the overall meaning, but I did find it deep and fascinating. What gave you this idea? Totally cool!




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