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My insides were filled with a
driving rain
a driving salt-filled rain
tearing at my insides
at the mere sound of his name being
spoken aloud
his ungodly name
my heart was a rusted
iron rod beacuse of the rain
the maddening, immoble, unstopping
RAIN!!!
and the rain was because him,
the disgusting
not even human,
creature





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Zad B. said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 8:30 am
Wow, this sure is an angry poem. The ugly side of love.
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 4:15 pm
thats wat is meant to be
 
Zad B. replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 7:58 am
Yes, I know. It's angrily beautiful =P
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:58 pm
wow, thats a cool way of descibing it! i like that discription, or however you spell it, whatever. anyway, thanks!!!!
 
LaylaViolet said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:47 am
I didn't get the overall meaning, but I did find it deep and fascinating. What gave you this idea? Totally cool!
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 4:22 pm
my boyfriend broke up with me and i just wanted to hit something but at the same time i felt like bawling and this is what my heart felt like, thanks for checking out so many of my poems and stuff. :)
 
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