I WILL NOT LET GO

July 23, 2009
By Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
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All is
plunging
into the
oceon.
Fabricating their
path
to the deep.
dare not chase
what's already
gone.
Because it burns
really, really
bad.
Be stubborn
enough
and you
will
drown yourself.
Get
trapped and
buried
in the
eyes
of regret.
Instead
reach for
what
will always
and
forever remain
with
and only
you.
My heart.



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kysh15 said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:20 pm
kysh15, Edmonds, Washington
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lots of emotion, i love it!

on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:10 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

oh i luv this. u put amazing emotion in ur poem and really spoke from the heart :)) fantastic job. keep it up!!!

on Jan. 30 2010 at 11:34 am
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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this is really good! there are a few minor spelling errors, but I really feel the emotion you're trying to convey! I love the ending - so emotional. good job :)

on Jul. 31 2009 at 8:27 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Great poem!!! Oh, and don't worry you are a great writer, and will probally be really famous one day!


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