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All is
plunging
into the
oceon.
Fabricating their
path
to the deep.
dare not chase
what's already
gone.
Because it burns
really, really
bad.
Be stubborn
enough
and you
will
drown yourself.
Get
trapped and
buried
in the
eyes
of regret.
Instead
reach for
what
will always
and
forever remain
with
and only
you.
My heart.



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kysh15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 2:20 pm:
lots of emotion, i love it!
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 9:10 pm:
oh i luv this. u put amazing emotion in ur poem and really spoke from the heart :)) fantastic job. keep it up!!!
 
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Christina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 11:34 am:
this is really good! there are a few minor spelling errors, but I really feel the emotion you're trying to convey! I love the ending - so emotional. good job :)
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 8:27 pm:
Great poem!!! Oh, and don't worry you are a great writer, and will probally be really famous one day!
 
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