Bliss

July 23, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~


i hunt through my dreams,
searching for meaning
i find nothing, nothing
but emptiness, the holow
of a tree
then you come along
and i see everything
i see little birds singing
their happy tunes and the
young foals grazing about
and prancing all around
without any boundries
i see the tiny woodland
creatures scurry along the
ground and the radiant
butterflies flutter and float
with bliss and i see you,
the one, the one who brings
me joy for my dreams
and dreams can come true


The author's comments:
I love to read and write, and i love looking at art, even though i can't draw. when i grow up i hope to be an author, pshychologist, or work with autistic children.

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on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:19 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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chetahgirl20 you should look at some of my poems. they are good or so ive heard and i would like to know what you think.

Estrellita said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 12:37 am
Estrellita, Sammamish, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
I wrote this quote last year, hopefully it helps you:
"There are two paths in life but only one of them leads us to success; failure is nothing ot fear for it is only a lesson in life."

I really like your poem, it is deep but I like the imagery as well. Good job.

on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:06 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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love this poem. very well writen and a great title but it might be i just like the word bliss. haha o_O

on Jan. 9 2010 at 11:53 am
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

ya, its one of my old ones i just submitted a few more of my poems, they're a little more dark. and thanks so much

on Jan. 9 2010 at 11:00 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me

Since you know i like the dark side of poems, this poem is a.... change for me. Good job on the imagery!

on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:51 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

ya i get it, its fine and i dont know. there might be. wish i knew....let me look around and find out!

on Nov. 16 2009 at 8:00 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
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I can't post my email publicly...sorry. Isn't there a private message option on this site?

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:20 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

hey, is there any way i can contact you, id really like to be able to email you or tell you some more of m work before it goes online

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:16 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

thanks so much

on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:28 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments
This is a very deep poem. Beautiful

mandygale77 said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 11:47 am
That was really sweet.




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