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i hunt through my dreams,
searching for meaning
i find nothing, nothing
but emptiness, the holow
of a tree
then you come along
and i see everything
i see little birds singing
their happy tunes and the
young foals grazing about
and prancing all around
without any boundries
i see the tiny woodland
creatures scurry along the
ground and the radiant
butterflies flutter and float
with bliss and i see you,
the one, the one who brings
me joy for my dreams
and dreams can come true





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Estrellita said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 12:37 am
I really like your poem, it is deep but I like the imagery as well. Good job.
 
dip_stick said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 6:06 pm
love this poem. very well writen and a great title but it might be i just like the word bliss. haha o_O
 
Zad B. said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 7:28 am
This is a very deep poem. Beautiful
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 4:16 pm
thanks so much
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 4:20 pm
hey, is there any way i can contact you, id really like to be able to email you or tell you some more of m work before it goes online
 
Zad B. replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 8:00 am
I can't post my email publicly...sorry. Isn't there a private message option on this site?
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:51 pm
ya i get it, its fine and i dont know. there might be. wish i knew....let me look around and find out!
 
chetahgirl20 replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 11:00 am
Since you know i like the dark side of poems, this poem is a.... change for me. Good job on the imagery!
 
FlamableFyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 11:53 am
ya, its one of my old ones i just submitted a few more of my poems, they're a little more dark. and thanks so much
 
mandygale77 said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 11:47 am
That was really sweet.
 
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