Death

February 16, 2009
By Anonymous

Mistreated, defeated
So alone inside
Yet can't I find
Some place to confide?

I know I'm not perfect
I know I'm not well
I know I'm not nice
But seriously, what the hell?

You kick me
You shove me
You push me
You love me
What is wrong with you?

And then
As the emotions swirl through my head
I realize one thing
You are dead


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Qwop-O BRONZE said...
on Jul. 28 2009 at 1:43 pm
Qwop-O BRONZE, Trophy Club, Texas
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it was really good!!!

on Jul. 24 2009 at 6:46 pm
StolenStArburstinterruptioN BRONZE, Nowheresville, Other
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This is seriously awesome, it reminds me of me. :D

on Jul. 24 2009 at 6:45 pm
StolenStArburstinterruptioN BRONZE, Nowheresville, Other
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This is seriously awesome, it reminds me of me. :D

on Jul. 24 2009 at 2:24 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow. I love it 5 stars. Keep writeing.

on Jul. 24 2009 at 11:02 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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Wow, very nice. I like it a lot. It has a nice beat to it, and it flows nicely. Great job! ^_^

on Jul. 23 2009 at 11:25 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

WOW that was soooooooooo creepy and cool at the same time!!!!! LOVED IT


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