Death

By , Smithtown, NY
Mistreated, defeated
So alone inside
Yet can't I find
Some place to confide?

I know I'm not perfect
I know I'm not well
I know I'm not nice
But seriously, what the hell?

You kick me
You shove me
You push me
You love me
What is wrong with you?

And then
As the emotions swirl through my head
I realize one thing
You are dead





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the-random said...
Jul. 28, 2009 at 1:43 pm
it was really good!!!
 
StolenStArburstinterruptioN said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 6:46 pm
This is seriously awesome, it reminds me of me. :D
 
StolenStArburstinterruptioN said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 6:45 pm
This is seriously awesome, it reminds me of me. :D
 
Midknightrider said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 2:24 pm
Wow. I love it 5 stars. Keep writeing.
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 11:02 am
Wow, very nice. I like it a lot. It has a nice beat to it, and it flows nicely. Great job! ^_^
 
Tears2Roses said...
Jul. 23, 2009 at 11:25 pm
WOW that was soooooooooo creepy and cool at the same time!!!!! LOVED IT
 
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