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Breaking Stone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Below me are the put-downs
others made of me in stone.
Only I can break them,
and only I alone.

For even though they're marked in stone,
they're not permanent. They don't matter.
Only I know my true feelings,
and they can make rocks shatter.

Then I took my true feelings,
and etched them in the sky,
Now I always know what I am,
and the reason why.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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FayrouzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8 at 6:11 pm:
I'm not too good at interpreting poems, but I truly enjoyed the references to stones in yours. Stones are hard, unbreakable, and tough...but they also hurt if they're thrown at you! Great job! I would suggest using fancier word choice to make your poem more poetic. Good luck with your writing!
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 9 at 6:37 am :
Thanks!!!!
 
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literateVioletThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 9:33 am:
love the pic and this poem great job
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 6:12 pm :
Thanks! :) but just so you know, I didn't have anything to do with the pic....
 
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Violetrose said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
It was really good!
 
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Luna1 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 11:47 pm:
I totally agree with Day-Dreamer! That totally deserved to be in the magazine!! I loved it!
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 5:54 pm :
Thanks :) I almost died when I got the acceptance email!  I saw the subject line and almost fainted...glad i didn't ;D
 
Luna1 replied...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 8:44 pm :
Me too. xD I wish we were at the same school or something. Then we could share ideas and stuff. You could give me tips on how to write!! XD
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 3:08 pm :
Ya well you're good at writing toooo!!! and if we were in the same school that would be great.  i can't find anyone like you or me at my school, its full of clique girls. 
 
Luna1 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 10:38 pm :
Ugh. Me too, but I don't want to say much since EVERYBODY sees this.
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:10 am :
everybody sees what?..
 
Luna1 replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 1:14 pm :
The comments. You know, all our conversations. I could see the comments I posted from last week. Just look at the first comment you have. That was from day dreamer. From september. And these dont have delete buttons.
 
Luna1 replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 1:19 pm :
waaa!! XD waaa waaa!
 
Luna1 replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 1:22 pm :
I meant X( XD -oh, I mean X(
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 5:35 pm :

Yeah, but I can request to delete...

but I can see your point, because Teenink is where ALL the most popular girls in school go on the web (playfully sarcastic)

 
Luna1 replied...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 7:08 pm :
Well some people I know still see this, so I'm still not going to say much. I wanted to mention this other website, but this website doesn't let me post the comment.
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 9:42 am :
oh, ok then....still confused, but ok :S
 
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Day-Dreamer17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 5:56 pm:
Wonderful! I love it.
 
readaholic replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 6:27 pm :
Thank you! I'm surprised it got in the magazine, because no one really looked at it
 
Day-Dreamer17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 6:51 pm :
Someone recognized talent when they saw it. 'Cause that deffinitely deserved to be in the magazine.
 
readaholic replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 6:05 pm :
Thank you that makes me feel all fuzzy :D
 
SkyyeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2 at 10:45 am :
This is beautiful!! I really really like it, I love the message in it!!
 
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