forever you and me

July 7, 2009
Forever we may be,
Forever you and me,
Forever hand in hand,
Maybe a wedding band,
Forever in love you see,
Forever on one knee,
I will stand by your side,
As the changing tide,
Finds its way into our hearts,
And it’s too hard for us to be apart,
Forever will be too long,
And this can’t be the end of our song,
Forever we will be,
Just you,
And me…

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Ash... said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 3:06 pm
wow! i really really really like this! :) thanks for sharing :D
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 2:55 am
wow, you did a gret job. :) i like this a lot. your a great keep it up! also, check out and comment on some of my work!
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 18, 2009 at 8:42 pm
whoa, i love this poem so much too <3 it's so cute and meaningful (:
despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 7:28 pm
I love this piece. It is beautiful :)Thanks again for your comments, and in a few days I have like eight or nine new poems that they should be posting. Please come check them out! Thank! And, again, I love this poem!
CatiGirl said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 2:38 am
Awww, how sweet, yet with a slight bitterness at the end. Keep 'em coming, your work is good.
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