No More Love

July 7, 2009
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love
stops
working
after a while
Love looses battle and makes people cry
Love tries to take over your mind untill u fail
love keeps u down and love goes stail love is somthing that u can never win against love no no no no no no no no no stop stop all this all this love
I cant take this stupid love any more
Love is short and long
love makes u think about one person and one person only
love
no more love no more love for me
I cant see when love takes me and I cant speak when love takes over my brain love no more love no more battles for me ha ha love makes people crazy love love love love love love love





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Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 2:38 pm
WOW. I really like it. When you fall into love's trap, you are engulfed in a typhoon of sadness after it has inflicted itself upon one's ignorant heart. SO TRUE..good job!
 
Strawberry This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 1:41 pm
you have a good point. love does make people crazy, but it also gives people hope when they fall, or if they're fighting a battle. sure it causes tears, but it can wipe them away, too. anyway, great work!
 
xXFadedFlowerXx said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 7:31 pm
This is so true. Love does take over sometimes and it does cause a lot of pain. I always with love comes pain. Great poem.
 
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