No More Love

July 7, 2009
By Karlie Hankins BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
Karlie Hankins BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
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love
stops
working
after a while
Love looses battle and makes people cry
Love tries to take over your mind untill u fail
love keeps u down and love goes stail love is somthing that u can never win against love no no no no no no no no no stop stop all this all this love
I cant take this stupid love any more
Love is short and long
love makes u think about one person and one person only
love
no more love no more love for me
I cant see when love takes me and I cant speak when love takes over my brain love no more love no more battles for me ha ha love makes people crazy love love love love love love love


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Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:38 pm
WOW. I really like it. When you fall into love's trap, you are engulfed in a typhoon of sadness after it has inflicted itself upon one's ignorant heart. SO TRUE..good job!

on Jul. 15 2009 at 1:41 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

you have a good point. love does make people crazy, but it also gives people hope when they fall, or if they're fighting a battle. sure it causes tears, but it can wipe them away, too. anyway, great work!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 7:31 pm
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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This is so true. Love does take over sometimes and it does cause a lot of pain. I always with love comes pain. Great poem.


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