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Answer me!
Critique me!
Do whatever you want to me!
Just, please, don’t skip me.

I know it’s the same with you.
You want another view.
You think your writing career might be through,
just because no one bothered to write something new.

I know how it feels.
It’s gotten me to skip a few meals.
Just kidding.
But, seriously, it’s your opinion I’m bidding.

Please, just do it!
Before I throw a fit.
I’m getting desperate.
Is it not clear yet?

Once you finish,
Know that my thanks will never diminish.
If you want, I will read what you wrote,
and, again, if you want, I will vote.



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iwantcoconow said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 2:26 pm:
I was having problems with people not commenting also, being new writer is hard for me
 
tor10jax replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 2:32 pm :
Comment on as many articles as you can
 
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TheRightToDream This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:09 pm:
Poetry is all about expressing your feelings, and you've tackled a topic that I'm pretty sure all of us have encountered. Kudos :D
 
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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 11:53 pm:
I find this really funny because that's how all of us here on Teenink feel. We all want our work to be noticed! And you've put that into a poem... major props! I love this so much (:
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 3:02 am:
the reason you wrote it for is very understandable :) but the content is very good. i can feel all the emotion and i like how you converted that emotion into a great poem. im very impressed :) i will have to check out your other work because i have a feeling you are quite talented :) BRAVO!!!
 
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tor10jax said...
Aug. 4, 2009 at 6:21 pm:
 
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