The Truth On Runnin'

July 1, 2009
By TheCinders PLATINUM, Kentwood, Michigan
TheCinders PLATINUM, Kentwood, Michigan
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Took a picture of your runnin' feet
And I was surprised by what I saw
Must have been running for years
Cracked and bleeding
Sleeping on park benches
And surviving on hope alone
Must have been running for that


The author's comments:
I think this is up there with the best poems I've done. To me, it kind of sums up one boys courage and determination into a few lines.

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EdytD SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 7:52 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Nice! I definitely agree that this is a great one, and can see the courage and hardship that the runner must have gone through. Great job!




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