Endless Road

July 1, 2009
By _NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)


> I AM WALKING ON AN ENDLESS ROAD, THAT IS LEADING NOWHERE AT ALL.
> NO JOY, NO LOVE, JUST A MILE OF DESERT.
> I KNOW THAT I'M ALONE, ON A GLOOMY, GREY TRAIL.
> AS I RUN, I'M RUNNING FROM LIFE.
> NO ONE IS HOLDING MY HAND IN MY TRAVERSE:
> THAT IS WHAT STEALS LIGHT ON THE PATH.
> LOST COMPANIONS KEEPING THE WORLD DEAD.
> IF NOT SO, THE LAND /_WOULD_/ HAVE BEEN COLORFUL.
> THOUGH, NOW, I KNOW THAT I AM WRONG.
> BECAUSE IN THE DISTANCE, A NEW COLOR I SEE,
> I FEEL A REAL FEELING IN MY HEART:
> A RAY OF LIGHT IS JUST AHEAD -ON THE ENDLESS ROAD.

The author's comments:
Hi I am Huda and I wrote this poem when I was ten. I made another article called: Sacrifice. READ IT! Also, please rate and comment on my work!

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on Apr. 8 2011 at 1:00 pm
Kittogo_Nashumi, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
0 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
While others band together,
contented with false light;
I walk alone on a shadowy path,
searching for the sun.

It reminds me a little of my life in middle school. I was bullied severely by a bunch of stuck up kids and all I wanted to do was die. Luckily, three years later, i moved away into a better life. I would like to see a continuation of this.

(Oh please rate my work, it's Walk softly down the endless road,. thank you.)


_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2011 at 5:49 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

What?????    =\ ....

bobby said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 8:42 pm
so guess who i am?? HUDA

bobby said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 8:41 pm
OH MY GOD SUCH A ANOYING LIL BRAT IM JUST JK!!! my fellow frm school

puppy said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 8:38 pm
yo-i like this alot!srsly how do u write theese things ?with a big imaginary system loll so  ya bye kido

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 9:49 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

I WILL thank you. Thank you!   =3

bobby said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 6:23 pm

well! haha. very funny &^nice poem ....

no need to thank huda~


_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 9:53 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks!!!! =)

on May. 31 2010 at 7:08 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

This is good i like the end:) could you please comment and rate my work? it would mean alot to me

on May. 7 2010 at 7:44 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aw i like how the ending has a glimmer of hope:] nicee poem

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:37 pm
phototfreak16 SILVER, Covington, Indiana
5 articles 11 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not about how hard you can hit, it's about how hard you can get hit and keep going." - Rocky
"If life gives you lemons........ go sit in the living room and watch TV." - My dad on what to do if life gives you lemons

Thanks! It feels really great to have someone supporting my work!!

on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:07 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

Yes, it has been approved! I really hope you enjoy it!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 4:03 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Wow! That's great! I hope to see more of ur work soon!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:48 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Wow! Thanks so much! I'm glad they're pending. I want to see some of your work soon. I personally love to see artwork more than anything else on TeenInk.com!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:31 pm
phototfreak16 SILVER, Covington, Indiana
5 articles 11 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not about how hard you can hit, it's about how hard you can get hit and keep going." - Rocky
"If life gives you lemons........ go sit in the living room and watch TV." - My dad on what to do if life gives you lemons

I really liked this! I am going to post some more pictures (some are pending now) and poetry! I  think you definitely have talent!! Reading classics like Shakespeare, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Edgar Allan Poe, and Robert Frost rreally helped me understand different types of poetry!

BobbysGirl said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 9:44 pm
your welcome!!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 4:56 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks!!!!

BobbysGirl said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 4:25 pm
i liked this! :}

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:36 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Sure I will. Thanks for the comment! :)

JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:08 pm
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 258 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying."-Oscar Wilde

*claps* Fabulous! :) I can relate ;) i know you commented on one of my poems but perhaps comment on the others? :) Thanks ;)


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