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> I AM WALKING ON AN ENDLESS ROAD, THAT IS LEADING NOWHERE AT ALL.
> NO JOY, NO LOVE, JUST A MILE OF DESERT.
> I KNOW THAT I'M ALONE, ON A GLOOMY, GREY TRAIL.
> AS I RUN, I'M RUNNING FROM LIFE.
> NO ONE IS HOLDING MY HAND IN MY TRAVERSE:
> THAT IS WHAT STEALS LIGHT ON THE PATH.
> LOST COMPANIONS KEEPING THE WORLD DEAD.
> IF NOT SO, THE LAND /_WOULD_/ HAVE BEEN COLORFUL.
> THOUGH, NOW, I KNOW THAT I AM WRONG.
> BECAUSE IN THE DISTANCE, A NEW COLOR I SEE,
> I FEEL A REAL FEELING IN MY HEART:
> A RAY OF LIGHT IS JUST AHEAD -ON THE ENDLESS ROAD.




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puppy said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:38 pm:
yo-i like this alot!srsly how do u write theese things ?with a big imaginary system loll so  ya bye kido
 
Kittogo_Nashumi replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 1:00 pm :

It reminds me a little of my life in middle school. I was bullied severely by a bunch of stuck up kids and all I wanted to do was die. Luckily, three years later, i moved away into a better life. I would like to see a continuation of this.

(Oh please rate my work, it's Walk softly down the endless road,. thank you.)

 
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bobby said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 6:23 pm:

well! haha. very funny &^nice poem ....

no need to thank huda~

 
Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 9:49 pm :
I WILL thank you. Thank you!   =3
 
bobby replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:41 pm :
OH MY GOD SUCH A ANOYING LIL BRAT IM JUST JK!!! my fellow frm school
 
bobby replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:42 pm :
so guess who i am?? HUDA
 
Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 5:49 pm :
What?????    =\ ....
 
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Supernova7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 31, 2010 at 7:08 pm:
This is good i like the end:) could you please comment and rate my work? it would mean alot to me
 
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jonas_chic899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 7, 2010 at 7:44 am:
aw i like how the ending has a glimmer of hope:] nicee poem
 
Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 9:53 pm :
Thanks!!!! =)
 
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phototfreak16 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:37 pm:
Thanks! It feels really great to have someone supporting my work!!
 
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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:07 pm:
Yes, it has been approved! I really hope you enjoy it!
 
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phototfreak16 said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:31 pm:
I really liked this! I am going to post some more pictures (some are pending now) and poetry! I  think you definitely have talent!! Reading classics like Shakespeare, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Edgar Allan Poe, and Robert Frost rreally helped me understand different types of poetry!
 
ZAVERYThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:48 pm :
Wow! Thanks so much! I'm glad they're pending. I want to see some of your work soon. I personally love to see artwork more than anything else on Teenink.com!
 
ZAVERYThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 4:03 pm :
Wow! That's great! I hope to see more of ur work soon!
 
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BobbysGirl said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 4:25 pm:
i liked this! :}
 
ZAVERYThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 4:56 pm :
Thanks!!!!
 
BobbysGirl replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 9:44 pm :
your welcome!!
 
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JeanGreyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:08 pm:
*claps* Fabulous! :) I can relate ;) i know you commented on one of my poems but perhaps comment on the others? :) Thanks ;)
 
ZAVERYThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:36 pm :
Sure I will. Thanks for the comment! :)
 
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