Shooting Stars

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One by one, sparkling.
One by one, laughing.

One by one, being watched

Until they start to fall.

One by one, falling.
One by one, crying.

One by one, trying to stop

from leaving the heavens above.





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Like*Whoa!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 11:24 pm
thats bittersweet and beautiful:) GREAT job, i like the "last stanza" check out some of my stuff if you can <3
 
carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 6:31 pm
thank you for giving me comments!!! :) glad you like the poem!
 
SilverDawn said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 10:11 pm
hey, i love the little pattern there. and you make the stars sound so cute (: love it!
 
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