Shooting Stars

June 20, 2009
By carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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One by one, sparkling.
One by one, laughing.

One by one, being watched

Until they start to fall.

One by one, falling.
One by one, crying.

One by one, trying to stop

from leaving the heavens above.



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LIKEwhoaa GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2009 at 11:24 pm
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

thats bittersweet and beautiful:) GREAT job, i like the "last stanza" check out some of my stuff if you can <3

on Aug. 7 2009 at 6:31 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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thank you for giving me comments!!! :) glad you like the poem!

on Aug. 5 2009 at 10:11 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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hey, i love the little pattern there. and you make the stars sound so cute (: love it!


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