I like your poems but i think you should try doing something a little darker. Not just about love and heart break... Go toward another kind of relationship or just life in gerneral and see how you do. I like sometimes just to pick a random instance in my life and dewell there and embellish the details. Take a look at some of my stuff alot of it is about death and love but not gorey or freaky or anything. One of the most indept and true ones is tranger in my house its long but worth reading. And red velevet is my favorite love one but people seem to love abandonment. I'd appreciate any comment