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Downtown Centered This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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By Danica P., Plainfield, NJ
Photo credit: Sarah C., Hillsdale, NJ
This was Westfield, Downtown
Before the cop cars.

We stood behind Starbucks
Kids with their lighters and ciggs
With energy drinks
Filched from the Stop and Shop
Down the street

Anthony’s car speakers blasted Metallica, too loud for soft-spoken ears
But the employees didn’t care
As long as we were on the other side
Of the non-Starbucks owned Brown Door

The vintage matron griped, the constables showed up
These days seem like the town’s all out
And prostitots are running around
Got a bender to set up our tripwires soon

Movie theater lights shine outward
Cast shadows on pavements
As we walk out Broad Street
To Nomahegan and the Gazebo

From the swingset you can see the stars
Now look through glass panes on windows
Into wired factories whose jobs we don’t know
I want a doughnut, she wants one too

Promenade to Stop and Shop
“I’ve got you covered,” a smile for her
Laze outside until the monotones come
Drink sodas ’til the crack of doom

Or at least until we gotta be home
Parents phoned, required home by eleven
Disinclined to acquisce, but otherwise I’m grounded
So now is the death of our Dusks
And the birth of our Midnights
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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mutekid016 said...
Nov. 19 at 7:45 pm:

Awesome work! I loved it all. Good descripton and words!

 
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dA gAnGsTeR! said...
Sep. 2 at 12:34 am:

Oh, my most favorite part was,So now is the death of our dusks,and the birth of our midnights! Veri BEAUTIFUL! Its very creative and i really like it!

 
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Chrissy R. said...
Aug. 30 at 3:47 am:

wow! awesome! you're really good.

 
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kissingdawn331 said...
Aug. 28 at 3:17 pm:

it was great...we have the same name!!! no lie

 
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~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Aug. 26 at 8:16 pm:

i liked this. it was good. :) great job!

 
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mandygale77 said...
Aug. 4 at 11:41 pm:

Wow, that was a bit depressing, but good.

 
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KDtheGhostwriter said...
Aug. 3 at 6:51 pm:

Very good. I'd like to know if this is an actual town! Clever word play, good description.

 
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a B. said...
Jul. 31 at 1:34 am:

Loved it! Keep Writing.

 
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writingsavedmylife said...
Jul. 28 at 2:58 pm:

great descriptions. i feel like i'm actually there.

 
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lovehate29 said...
Jul. 23 at 9:45 pm:

This is beautiful. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!

~~If you have time, will you please check out my work. Comment and rate if you wish! Thanks!

 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 16 at 9:16 pm:

Incredible. :)

 
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Hollywog. said...
Jul. 13 at 3:53 am:

This is an incredible piece of work. Well done!

 
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