June 22, 2009
By METAFORE BRONZE, Lumberton, Texas
METAFORE BRONZE, Lumberton, Texas
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yes this is true
i have fallen in love
not a soul can change this
nor an angel from above
i've found my beauty
inside of an angel
the devil tries tobreak us
but we are to faithful
the way i lvoe her heart
is more than love itself
love is he main factor
i treat her better than myself
she is the golden dream
that takes away my fears
i know longer have nightmares
so i no longer have tears
there is all kinds of love
i lvoe my father my mother
myself and my brothers
but i'll never love her like any other.

The author's comments:
i have come a long way in life i wrote this poem about the same girl that i have lost once again i pray for help please let me know what you think =) thank you

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on Jul. 1 2009 at 3:07 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
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on Jul. 1 2009 at 3:02 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
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I love this piece. Its deep. I hope that you get her back and that you don't looser her again. Keep Praying. Eventually it will be answered, maybe not how you want it to be answered though. I to have been in a relationship where my boyfriend was like your the best thing ever and then brakes up with me the next day. Keep in touch?!? Look at some of my work plz..tell me if you like it. Keep have some good talent. :) ~Lexi~

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