Hidden

June 23, 2009
By Abienda Regilus BRONZE, Williamstown, New Jersey
Abienda Regilus BRONZE, Williamstown, New Jersey
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Hidden.
Can you see her?
The girl.
The girl you thought you knew.
The girl who never cared about you.
Can you see her?
Right there.
Phony & fake but she covers it up.
Insecure so she criticizes other people.
She's hiding.
Because she's scared no one will
accept her for who she is.
Can you see her?
The girl who smiles when she's dying inside.
The girl who is nice to make up for the mean.
The girl who talks because she hates silence's secrets.
Look at her.
Hiding.
Such a coward.
Such a phony.
Such a fake.
Such a loser.
I see her for who she really is.
Take the blindfold off your eyes & seethe truth.
I see her.
Can you?


The author's comments:
Sometimes everyone loses sight of who they are and they are going to be. I lost sight and I hope it expresses how I felt when I noticed I had.

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on Mar. 13 2010 at 9:28 pm
Abienda Regilus BRONZE, Williamstown, New Jersey
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Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:46 pm
Stephanie.Marie GOLD, Manasss, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"you wasted life why wouldn't you waste the after life" modest mouse.

"take the blindfold off your eyes" I like this saying. I've used something like that in my work too. I like this poem! keep it up, your good!


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