This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This is perfect. It really is. I fell in love with it right away because the energy flow is just perfect for your topic. You have an incredible amount of talent! NEVER stop writing. I (like) to think that some of my stuff has the same sort of style... I would love it if you could maybe critique some of it. I'm really looking for advice and ideas so I can expand my creativity when I write. :D
i love how this is the honest truth about falling for someone, with no curtains to hide any meaning. great job, keep it up.
I like this poem. I write alot of things like this. I can deffinitly relate to your pain.
this is amazing..
i can definately relate..
amazing work (:
Great job. personally, i loved it and could relate. Keep writting, i want to keep reading.
i like it alot!! i just wish you woulda left the cats out of it.. keep up tha work though.
my girlfriend has a quote she used in some of her music "i wish for once i could fall in love and land on my feet, instead of falling face down in concrete." And you beautifully expressed that in this poem
I like this poem it shows the inner conflict in each person when they really fall for someone.
It says it like it is no horse crap.
makes you think and thats a good thing! keep writing but it couldve used a few more tweaks to it. check out my poem called breakdown please comment lol.
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