so true! Authors or any type of artists have to be insane to create the masterpeices they do.thanks for the comment. I love Cat's character so much of myself is in her. thats the best thing about being a writter, poet, whatever... is that you put yourself in your work.
Thanks for the comments guys! And T totally agree with you, Grania about cutting out "completely" but I like the third line the way it is. More constructive criticism on this and all my other pieces is extremely appreciated. <(0.o)>
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SO true! The last two lines of this don't follow the rhythm that the first two set them up for, though. I think the poem would be more satisfying if you cut the word 'completely' and also shrunk the third line. Itis really good.
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