What Keeps Me Holding On

June 12, 2009
By Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"


Theres not a day i dont think about you
There isnt a night i dont dream about you
There isnt a minute i dont want you back
There isnt a second without you my heart doesnt crack
Cause im still inlove with you
Im inlove with everything you do
Im sorry that we would fight
All i want is to hold you tight
With you i knew no one could ever hurt me
I know you love me its easy to see
Every touch,Every smile,Every look,Every tear,Every kiss
Are some of the things i miss
And to know we had a love so strong
These are the things that keep me holding on.

The author's comments:
This poem is about a guy i was completly inlove with but we broke up over stupid little fights and i wanted nothing more to have him back...and in the end we got back together but broke up again and now he is my bestfriend

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on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:00 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I agree, it's all great but I love the ending the most! :) Keep writing girl

on Jan. 21 2010 at 3:16 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

ok just let me know when its up and ill check it out and ill do the same for u if u want?

on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:39 pm
Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"speak your mind even if your voice shakes"

ok i sure wil ill have some new work up soon to

on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:37 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

aww thank u im glad u like it...as soon as they approve it ill have another one up and alot of people say its my best soo pls check it out once its up and let me know wat u think :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:35 pm
Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"speak your mind even if your voice shakes"

beautiful :) i love your work and its so true i just went through this and we got back together. i love it!

on Dec. 23 2009 at 1:45 pm
oddballinthegroup GOLD, Wausau, Wisconsin
18 articles 1 photo 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
pinaple is my favorite vegitable

this was an amazing poem i still wish i were with my ex but i found a new guy one 10000000000x better than him

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on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:57 am
Harley BRONZE, Liberty, West Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
awhhh this poem is really cad, it tells the truth about realtionships.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 5:28 pm
marleighxo6 GOLD, Glen Rock, New Jersey
11 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
To me, “FEARLESS” is not the absence of fear. It’s not being completely unafraid. To me, FEARLESS is having fears. FEARLESS is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, FEARLESS is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.

- Taylor Swift

very nice, very emotional.

good work!

on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:04 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

thank you soo much im glad you liked it

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:50 am
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
27 articles 27 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

Simple as that.

Or not that simple.

Nice. The ending is very sweet.

on Nov. 4 2009 at 2:45 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

Great meaning and insight. I loved it.

Beautiful poem darling=]

-Please check out my poems that I have posted it would be greatly apreciated.

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:22 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

Thank u for ur comment it ment alot too me and also thank u for rating my poem a 5 that means more then anything too me because i didnt think my poems were all that great now i see from peoples comments and stuff that they are again thank u soo much

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:13 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

Your very welcome for the comment and thank u so much for urs like i told another person who commented on this poem i love when people can relate to my poems cause then they are relating to me and my issues cause thats wat my poems are about. If u could pls rate my poem it would mean alot to me.Also i am putting some new stuff up today if u would like to check them out and let me know wat u think that would be great

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:10 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

i absolutly love it when people can relate to my poems cause then they r realating to me because i write about my life experiences mostly i think i have a few in my collection that arnt life experience but you get the point...Thanks for the comment it made me feel good that i am accomplishing part of my goal which is like i said too have people realate to me and my poems :) Pls rate my poem when u get a chance i would appriciate it soo much

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:08 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

thank u soo much for ur comment on my poem it meant alot to me :) i really do appriciate it! if u could pls rate my poem i would love that again thank u

on Nov. 3 2009 at 12:44 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

this poem is pretty, and i like how your words make the poem flow. congrats and keep writing

on Nov. 2 2009 at 7:58 pm
lizardqueen BRONZE, Alpine, California
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i can totally relate to this poem. i felt the same thing after my first love broke up with me. but in the end it was for the best because ive now found the guy that i will truly love forever <3

on Nov. 2 2009 at 4:38 pm
TWISTED101 BRONZE, Selma, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
it may be raining now but it cant rain forever

this is sweet my gurl ditched me and i feel this for her but its too late but it is amazing to know love can be so strong by the way good rhymes and keep up the good work thank 4 the comment

on Nov. 2 2009 at 10:00 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

I liked the ending.

I know you truley felt this, and thats what makes a poem.

Keep letting it out, keep writing. :D


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