Can you see the dots? This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Can you see the dots?
The red ones I mean.
At night
In the pitch black.
When you can't sleep –
Do you see them and
wonder
if you are the only one?

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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alanacarlene said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 1:08 pm

I love this  it's simple but it's great!

I can see the red dots. :)

 
aydenblack This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:23 pm
I liked this.
It reminds me of when I'm trying to sleep, but the two red lights on my stereo, looking like eyes, frighten me slightly.
Perhaps this is not what you much, but...
I like it.
 
aydenblack This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:23 pm
*Perhaps this is not what you MEANT, but...
 
firstsnowfalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 3:18 pm
Thanks! :)
 
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