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My Sparrow

the sparrow follows me...
my constant companion..
my truest friend...

the sparrow speaks to me...
with words of wisdom...
with words of care...

the sparrow stays with me...
through times of sorrow...
he's always there...

my gaurdian angel...
he lifts me up...
with his wings he guides me..
and i never give up...
in life he protects me...
in death he'll be with me...

my sparrow, my angel...
my life, my death...
you're always behind me...
and i'm two steps ahead...

my sparrow follows me...
my sparrows there...
my truest friend...
i know you care...




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SemiVeggie said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 7:07 pm:
Wow. Loved it -- you should write more poetry! The only thing that made me wince was rhyming "up" with
"up" I know you have to do it sometimes, but just so you know...
 
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Inkspired said...
Jul. 19, 2009 at 8:56 pm:
I love sparrows, they're so cute, and I love how you made a "sparrow" your angel. Amazing poem! Is it really supposed to be a sparrow, or is it supposed to symbolize someone else?
 
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amyxu said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 5:13 pm:
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and I came across your poem. Wow, this was very delicately crafted. As I read, I could tell right off the bat that every word was chosen with care! Nice job :)
 
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smokeythebear said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 8:40 pm:
Wow you are great i love every poem. My only question is who are these about?
 
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