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Ode to the great blue sky
Oh, how I wonder why –
Am I inside

They say “an institute for learning”
With always the yearning
To be outside

The walls feel ever closer
Think I can focus? No, sir.
Trapped inside

The bell rings, time to escape,
Dashing for the door looking like an ape
I am outside

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cassxxx8 said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 1:19 pm:

very goood!

 
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imawriter? said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 8:21 pm:

Dreamy. I love the flow and just about everything else. This piece "spoke" to me, if that makes any sense. Its relatable, but has a little mystery. Fantastic!

 
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Lillian said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 11:19 am:

Very beautiful. I love your flow-rhythm and patterns as well.
Not to hard to understand but still keeps a bit of mystery, I love that in a poem!

 
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Katherine H. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 6:45 pm:

Loved it. makes me think how i feel when i see the sky outside the school and finally the bell rings.
It's like totally cool dude. haha

 
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MorningStar15VIP said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 1:31 am:

nice :)

 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:29 pm:

That was cool. :) I liked it!

 
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~blackrose~VIP said...
Jun. 29, 2009 at 8:29 pm:

cute lol keep it up

 
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