Love Lost in a Hail of Gunfire

June 7, 2009
By Otter BRONZE, Roseburg, Oregon
Otter BRONZE, Roseburg, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
A dream you dream alone is only a dream.A dream you dream together becomes reality.
~John Lennon

I didn't think
That it would
End like this
That you would
Be the one
To kill me
I trusted you
You were my friend
My brother
Now my blood
Stains your hands
My heart falls
The pain keeps growing
And then you give
Me the final blow
My pain subsides
And my eyes gently close
The last thing I see
Is you my brother
Smiling as I go
Deeper I am gone
Heart beating
I am no more
I hope your happy
With my death
You always said
You'd love me
Better dead

The author's comments:
My friend cliff and I wrote this togther.I think it is our best.

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