Blinking

June 6, 2009
By Kait.Rose BRONZE, Mitchell, Nebraska
Kait.Rose BRONZE, Mitchell, Nebraska
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When I close my eyes
all I see is you,
scared,
everything spinning too fast,
a blur.

When I open my eyes,
I realize,
I too am scared,
everything spinning too fast,
a blur.

When I close my eyes,
all I hear is brakes,
hitting the floor
and the tires,
coming to a painfully slow stop.

When I open my eyes,
all I hear is my heart,
hitting the floor
and my breathing,
come to a painfully slow stop.

The author's comments:
It's the same one I already posted only I fixed it. I changed some of the wording and some of the spelling. Please, tell me if it is good.

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