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I always used to dream about a world with someone who loved me

Loved me as I am, flaws and all.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would be willing to stay

Up with me for hours talking and listening to what I had to say.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would never be scared

To hold me in his arms when I am scared, confused, upset, or angry.

To kiss me and tell me everything is going to be ok.

To give me advice whenever I am stuck or troubled.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would treat me with

The utmost respect. Respecting my feelings, my spirit, and my body.

Dreamt about a world with someone who made me feel like a

Princess. A world with someone who understands me and make

Me understand myself.

I dreamt of that world and it came true.

Almost like déjà vu.





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sillyaardvarkabc said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:01 pm
I love this-- it almost seems impossible that a person could be that perfect. However, I think you should try to write more short stories! Your poems are great don't get me wrong, but I think you should try different mediums of writing. Great work!
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:20 pm
loved the rhythm and the sometimes rhyme. i absolutely agree with despurlock.
 
despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 2:02 pm
Beautiful! I love it :) And I find this so so so sooooooooo relatable! Again, another 5 stars and a fave! I'm gonna work on readin all your poems because I love them!
 
tbkeleli said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 8:12 pm
awww this is a sweet poem. great work. i like how you compared it to deja vu.
 
write4life_0912 said...
Jun. 24, 2009 at 1:02 pm
Dnt we all wish! this is great1 I♥it!
 
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