You Had Me

June 5, 2009
By Mandilee GOLD, Sierra Madre, California
Mandilee GOLD, Sierra Madre, California
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How you sing,
how you smile,
it all makes me stop and stare for a little while

the way you walk,
way you dress,
oh, you're such a beautiful mess

you don't care
'bout a thing
you just walk,
hold my hand,
it's getting hard to stand

there was a lock
on my heart
you broke through it with ease
now you've got me, here on my knees

how you did it, I don't know
it breaks my heart everytime you go
I wonder if you see
how much you mean to me

you broke through the lock gracefully,
in one fluid movement,
you had me


The author's comments:
This poem portrays the person I'd love to fall in love with, the boy I have yet to meet, the guy who will be just as crazy for me as I am head-over-heels for him.

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