Bottled Up

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Bottled it up,
Let it explode,
Let it explode,
To let go of the load,
Load got bigger,




Heavier,






More difficult,
Blowing up with emotion is not cool,
Not the right cure,



For healing the mood,







Collapsed and shuddered,





Wept and yelled,
Insults after insults,


Believing all ends well,






Jump up,







Brush it off,





But the agony’s still there,



Plopped under a tree,

Wanting to be alone somewhere,
Went over the steps again,

Thought it out and had it well repaired,

So I…
Bottled it up,
Let it explode,
Let it explode,
To let go of the load,
Load got bigger,




Heavier,





More difficult,
Blowing up with emotion is not cool,
Not the right cure,



For healing the mood…







But I just kept on loving him.





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Munchie said...
Jun. 23, 2009 at 5:39 pm
Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it. I usually don't let other people read my poetry but I'm sort of glad i did.
 
ACooke said...
Jun. 22, 2009 at 2:52 pm
oh. my. god. this is an absolutely amazing poem! its completely real and i totally understand everything! i understood it before i got to the bottom and then i got to the bottom and i understood it in a whole new way!
 
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