Eyes

June 4, 2009
By Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
15 articles 6 photos 47 comments

Eyes
Searching

Color
Deepest ocean blue

Wrinkles
Cloud
Each and every
Smile

But the glittery twinkle
Keeps them
Young

Wandering
Around the crowded
Room

Seeking
For someone, something
Important

No emotion
Coal black
Fear
Escapes



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on Aug. 11 2009 at 6:02 pm
abooga.looga SILVER, Covina, California
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i love the rythm in this(: very nice

on Jul. 31 2009 at 3:51 pm
Icecreamwon BRONZE, Cliffside Park, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Where there's a will, there's a way.

i think that this poem is likely to be published. It is really nice! i hope that i will be able to see other great work from you.

on Jul. 29 2009 at 6:25 pm
**alwaysbeme** BRONZE, Valparaiso, Indiana
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the wonderful flow in your words really gets me thinking of meanings

on Jul. 27 2009 at 3:26 am
starrymusic BRONZE, STL, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way to deal with an unfree world is to become so absolutely free that your very existence is an act of rebellion."

"Life is what happens while we're busy making other plans." - John Lennon

this is an incredible poem. i can tell it came from your soul. keep it up. =)

on Jul. 17 2009 at 4:43 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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hey, nice poem! you do have a great rhythm and your desciptions are so vivid too (:

on Jul. 12 2009 at 11:18 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

It has a really nice ryhthm


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