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Eyes

Eyes
Searching

Color
Deepest ocean blue

Wrinkles
Cloud
Each and every
Smile

But the glittery twinkle
Keeps them
Young

Wandering
Around the crowded
Room

Seeking
For someone, something
Important

No emotion
Coal black
Fear
Escapes



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abooga.looga said...
Aug. 11, 2009 at 6:02 pm:
i love the rythm in this(: very nice
 
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Icecreamwon said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 3:51 pm:
i think that this poem is likely to be published. It is really nice! i hope that i will be able to see other great work from you.
 
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Lindsey M. said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 6:25 pm:
the wonderful flow in your words really gets me thinking of meanings
 
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starrymusic said...
Jul. 27, 2009 at 3:26 am:
this is an incredible poem. i can tell it came from your soul. keep it up. =)
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:43 pm:
hey, nice poem! you do have a great rhythm and your desciptions are so vivid too (:
 
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awesomeaugustThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 11:18 pm:
It has a really nice ryhthm
 
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