Hatred

June 2, 2009
By shaybaybay198 BRONZE, Liverpool, New York
shaybaybay198 BRONZE, Liverpool, New York
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is what it is.


It = red as in blood
It happens when im stabbed in the back
It sounds like a drummer drumming on the drums non stop
Hatred


The author's comments:
I hate when im stabbed in the back. I hate back stabbers.....Who doesnt?

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on Jun. 15 2009 at 1:01 am
i love this poem. the repetition of the drummer drumming drums is wonderful. short and sweet.....and yeah backstabbers suck

on Jun. 14 2009 at 10:10 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
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Very good. its short though.cheak out my poems if you want.

amyxu said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 6:19 pm
I agree with earlier reviewers that the poem could be longer...way longer. But it's good so far!

IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 3:23 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

I like this. this is very nice start. I think you should make it longer, this is a very nice start and i think it would be much better longer. beutiful job really.


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