Hatred

June 2, 2009
It = red as in blood
It happens when im stabbed in the back
It sounds like a drummer drumming on the drums non stop
Hatred





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pinksage33 said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 10:10 pm
Very good. its short though.cheak out my poems if you want.
 
amyxu said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 6:19 pm
I agree with earlier reviewers that the poem could be longer...way longer. But it's good so far!
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 3:23 am
I like this. this is very nice start. I think you should make it longer, this is a very nice start and i think it would be much better longer. beutiful job really.
 
FracturedAngel said...
Jun. 15, 2009 at 1:01 am
i love this poem. the repetition of the drummer drumming drums is wonderful. short and sweet.....and yeah backstabbers suck
 
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