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This World

I WISH IT WOULD RAIN, AND ROWN THIS WOLD IN WHICH CHAOS
HAS TAKEN OVER.
FLOOD THE MINDS AND CLEANSE
THE THOUGHTS OF
THE UNLOVED.
BRING THIS WORLD TO GREATNESS!
SHOW PEOPLE THE LIGHT IN
WHICH THEY CAN
FOLLOW TO BECOME NEW. LET THEM
SEE HIS FACE AND FEEL
THE LOVE OF
SOMEONE WHO IS ALWAYS THERE,
LOOKING FROM THE
OUTSIDE INTO
THE HEARTS OF THOSE WHO BURDEN
THEMSELVES WITH THE
HATRED AND DIS -
PAIR OF OTHERS. LET THEM KNOW THAT THERE IS SOME-
THING TO LIVE
FOR AND TO NOT BE ASHAMED, BUT
TO BE PROUD OF WHO
THEY ARE.




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FracturedAngel said...
Jun. 15, 2009 at 2:34 am:
i gotta say i really like it =)
 
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Fangz said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 1:02 pm:
Nice sentiment. Relatable.
 
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storyofmylife said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 12:37 pm:
thanks... i rele didn't mean for it to be all caps actually... ^_^
 
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Nayr139 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 10:44 pm:
hey thanks so much for the comment on my story and this poem is awesome. keep writing
 
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storyofmylife said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 1:47 pm:
just wanted to say that the word 'rown' is actually supposed to be 'drown'... sorry... thankx for reading ;>
 
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JaseC said...
Jun. 10, 2009 at 10:10 pm:
hey I thought this was a pretty rad poem, but i think the all caps was a little excessive.
 
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