This World

May 31, 2009
By storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.


I WISH IT WOULD RAIN, AND ROWN THIS WOLD IN WHICH CHAOS
HAS TAKEN OVER.
FLOOD THE MINDS AND CLEANSE
THE THOUGHTS OF
THE UNLOVED.
BRING THIS WORLD TO GREATNESS!
SHOW PEOPLE THE LIGHT IN
WHICH THEY CAN
FOLLOW TO BECOME NEW. LET THEM
SEE HIS FACE AND FEEL
THE LOVE OF
SOMEONE WHO IS ALWAYS THERE,
LOOKING FROM THE
OUTSIDE INTO
THE HEARTS OF THOSE WHO BURDEN
THEMSELVES WITH THE
HATRED AND DIS -
PAIR OF OTHERS. LET THEM KNOW THAT THERE IS SOME-
THING TO LIVE
FOR AND TO NOT BE ASHAMED, BUT
TO BE PROUD OF WHO
THEY ARE.


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on Jun. 15 2009 at 2:34 am
FracturedAngel SILVER, Corning, New York
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i gotta say i really like it =)

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 1:02 pm
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Nice sentiment. Relatable.

on Jun. 12 2009 at 12:37 pm
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
27 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

thanks... i rele didn't mean for it to be all caps actually... ^_^

Nayr139 said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 10:44 pm
hey thanks so much for the comment on my story and this poem is awesome. keep writing

on Jun. 11 2009 at 1:47 pm
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
27 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

just wanted to say that the word 'rown' is actually supposed to be 'drown'... sorry... thankx for reading ;>

JaseC GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2009 at 10:10 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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hey I thought this was a pretty rad poem, but i think the all caps was a little excessive.


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