INDEPENDENT WOMAN

June 2, 2009
By LaShaeKnight BRONZE, Bham, Alabama
LaShaeKnight BRONZE, Bham, Alabama
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Like a independent woman with a glow
I'm a woman on her way to achieve her goal
And like a bird that fly up high
My success will rise like the morning sky
And with my independent hands
I don't have to rely on no man to tell me what i can
Yes I'm strong like my mother indeed
Because no is not an answer in what she can succeed

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Writer:LaShae K.

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BubbiG GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 9:04 pm
BubbiG GOLD, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"NEVER LOOK BACKWARDS ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD!"

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i truly like this one. it's such a real poem. and thanks for the comment on mine i'm glad you liked it.

on Jun. 16 2009 at 10:47 pm
I really like this. 1 or 2 grammar mistakes (:P I'm a grammar snob haha), but other than that this is awesome. Great idea.


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