Its My Heart

May 31, 2009
By storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
27 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.


You…
Sitting there…
I know you..
I know why they stare…
Why cant you see…
What its doing to me…

Hey…
Look at me…
Im talking to you…
Why cant you see…
We’re just alike…
Please come back…

Wait…
Turn around…
Can you hear that…
That loud sound…
Resounding so evenly…
Its my heart whats left of me…

Please..
Can you help…
I cant find it…
And I cant seem to tell…
It seems to be coming from somewhere outside…
I don’t understand, even though I try…

Stop…
Please don’t leave…
I want to give you my heart…
Whats left of me…


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LIKEwhoaa GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 8:01 pm
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

i love this, its so cute and i totally understand it :)GREAT job

<3

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2009 at 12:24 pm
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Not bad at all. Sounds like the speaker is doing all she can to whisper when she wants to scream. She seems weary, confused, and possibly a little delusional. Nice style. I think you'd be a better lyricist than a poet. You seem to have that mode of thinking. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

Richa BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 10:34 pm
Richa BRONZE, Brampton, Ontario, Other
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments
awwww..that was really good I loved the para

"Wait…

Turn around…

Can you hear that…

That loud sound…

Resounding so evenly…

Its my heart whats left of me…"

that caught my eye for sure..and also the last one..

beautiful and something which I am sure most of us have felt before..good work!

Nayr139 said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 10:50 pm
AMAZING! and thanks again for the comments and i have like 10 things pending cause its taking forever for them to make sure its not inappropriate LOL but ill leave you a comment whenever they get to it

on Jun. 11 2009 at 12:17 am
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
4 articles 1 photo 211 comments
Nice work!!! keep wrighting.




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