Lost Hope

May 28, 2009
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The tear,
Rolling down her delicate face,
Filled with lost dreams, past loves, and hopes for the future,
Falling quietly to the ground,
Dull from the lack of light in the room,
Quickly it is absorbed into the carpet,
Silently her sadness is gone,
But now she’s alone,
And no one will ever understand.

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SilverDawn said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 4:14 am
Heyy! I like the 3rd person point of view and I really could easily imagine the scene in my head. I also like how you said the tear was full of this and that and it's really nice (:
Sydney G. said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 2:26 am
WOWWWWW. its short but is sooo powerful!! i really like it alot. i love how u put the harsh feelings into words. keep on writing ! check out mine if yah get the chance:]
carriebearieforever said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 4:56 pm
i like, very real. good one
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