Dear Jerk

May 28, 2009
By ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
102 articles 8 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.


Dear Jerk,
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
What were you thinking?
Dumping me
I can’t believe it’s over,
The ride of my life-
Crashed.
Idiot.
To think
I thought
you had stolen my heart
Forever.
What a joke.
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
Idiot.

P.S. I still love you.



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reesha SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:03 am
reesha SILVER, Rawalpindi, Other
6 articles 15 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them."
Walt Disney

"Hakuna Matata!"
Lion King

"The British policy was 'unite and conquer'. But I say 'unite and conquer'."
Greg Mortenson (Three Cups of Tea)

good job! keep it up1

on Jun. 12 2009 at 5:55 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

LOL i love this poem! Absolutley love it! way to go!

on Jun. 8 2009 at 9:37 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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lol, that poem is so CUTE and HILARIOUS!

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:33 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Uhh.. wow.... that is... interesting..

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 5:15 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Wow. That was. Amazing. It felt so real. (As I'm sure it was) I can relate to this SO much. Your writing really touches people on a personal level. I love it. Keep writing.

God bless,

...,

on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:26 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
The last line was a bit abrupt but I like the letter-like style there =D

on Jun. 5 2009 at 5:00 pm
carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 8 comments
i agree, very direct, but very good.

on Jun. 5 2009 at 2:05 am
ChelseaH PLATINUM, McFarland, Wisconsin
24 articles 6 photos 4 comments
i know exactly how this feels. i can relate.

on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:21 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Interesting turn at the end.. maybe a little too direct. Though if i were feeling this- I suppose it would have been in this same directness that you've captured. Awesome.




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