Dear Jerk

Dear Jerk,
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
What were you thinking?
Dumping me
I can’t believe it’s over,
The ride of my life-
Crashed.
Idiot.
To think
I thought
you had stolen my heart
Forever.
What a joke.
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
Idiot.

P.S. I still love you.





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shywriter said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 12:03 am
good job! keep it up1
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 5:55 pm
LOL i love this poem! Absolutley love it! way to go!
 
Catharsis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 9:37 pm
lol, that poem is so CUTE and HILARIOUS!
 
Anjo! said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 5:33 pm
Uhh.. wow.... that is... interesting..
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 5:15 pm
Wow. That was. Amazing. It felt so real. (As I'm sure it was) I can relate to this SO much. Your writing really touches people on a personal level. I love it. Keep writing.
God bless,
...,
 
SilverDawn said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 4:26 am
The last line was a bit abrupt but I like the letter-like style there =D
 
carriebearieforever said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 5:00 pm
i agree, very direct, but very good.
 
ChelseaH said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 2:05 am
i know exactly how this feels. i can relate.
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 12:21 am
Interesting turn at the end.. maybe a little too direct. Though if i were feeling this- I suppose it would have been in this same directness that you've captured. Awesome.
 
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