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Run!

May 27, 2009
By Bobbie Jo Presbroten BRONZE, Hollandale, Wisconsin
Bobbie Jo Presbroten BRONZE, Hollandale, Wisconsin
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I can feel it.
It's going to let loose.
I know you want to hold me.
I know you want to comfort me.
I know you want to keep me as I am.
But for your own safety.
Please leave the room.
If it explodes and you are here...
You will die.
You can't stop me.
You can't save me.
You can't help me.
It's me against my own monster.
Jump out my window.
Race down the stairs.
Lock me in the house.
And don't come back.
This house is my prision.
If I am not locked up, I will kill you too.
You can't stop me.
You can't save me.
The moon is full tonight.
Tonight is the change.
Please, for your own safety, leave the room and leave me.
I love you dearly.
But I can't stop myself now.
Run! Run from me!
For I am a true vampire.


The author's comments:
I loved writing this peice but I think it just keeps saying the same thing over and over again just a little to much. What do you think?
ENJOY! (i love feedback)

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