Crick Crack

May 26, 2009
By Brea O. BRONZE, Benton Harbor, Michigan
Brea O. BRONZE, Benton Harbor, Michigan
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Crick crack the door opens
Screech scratch the door closes
Woosh-soosh the wind blows
While they play in the sand
Bing-ping the play ground talks to the kids lovingly
Thump-thump feet hit the ground
and all you can hear is people
Laughing and haveint the time of there life's.


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on May. 30 2009 at 11:41 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow this is very good! I like how you use oxymoron in this piece! Keep up the good work!! If you have time, please check out my work, comment, and rate if you wish. Thanks!




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