Crick Crack

May 26, 2009
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Crick crack the door opens
Screech scratch the door closes
Woosh-soosh the wind blows
While they play in the sand
Bing-ping the play ground talks to the kids lovingly
Thump-thump feet hit the ground
and all you can hear is people
Laughing and haveint the time of there life's.

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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2009 at 11:41 pm
Wow this is very good! I like how you use oxymoron in this piece! Keep up the good work!! If you have time, please check out my work, comment, and rate if you wish. Thanks!
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