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The Rolling Snow

May 24, 2009
By xosummerloveox39 SILVER, Gilbertsville, Pennsylvania
xosummerloveox39 SILVER, Gilbertsville, Pennsylvania
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The rolling snow breaks through the hills,
People watching full of chills,
Hearing cries from the valley,
So many you couldn’t tally.

Like a white river of snow,
From up high to down low,
Turning and jerking back and forth,
Quickly and quietly from the north.

I don’t know where to go,
There’s know escaping the snow,
Coming closer and closer in the night,
No one can see for there’s no light.

Crashing and crumbling rolling away,
Will this ever end today?



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on Jun. 19 2009 at 3:33 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is cute. One thing though, when you say "There's know escaping the snow" do you mean "There's no escaping the snow"? Other than that mistake, I think this piece is very beautiful. I love how the words flow together. Perfect!