Scars

May 23, 2009
By Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.


Yell and hit
That’s on the side
Hate and love
It’s in the middle
Two months since I saw you last
One on the finger
Clean, white, and happy
Pink puckered mess
I try to forget you,
But you won’t let me forget
You’re ever so present
And I thought invitation
Granted a goodbye
Yet you’re still in my head
And over me
Looming like a shadow


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on Nov. 21 2009 at 6:48 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

*gives round of applause* AWESOME :D

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 3:10 am
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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I liked the lines "I thought the invitation granted a goodbye". I'm not sure if the "and" is necessary.

Keep writing!


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