worth living

May 25, 2009
you wormed your way inside,
waking part of me for the ride,
i never felt this way before,
until i felt you at my hearts door.
why cant you look my way,
and see that im hear to stay,
i would never leave your side,
and my love would never again hide.
without you i will close myself,
and put my heart high on a shelf,
never to be touched again,
for if one true love i cant win,
then mylifesno longer worth living,
so to you all my love im giving.





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through_my_eyes said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 4:22 pm

love at first sight. Quite rare within our generation. Even so i like way it flows

 

 
windswift This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 9:15 pm

thank you, it was something off the top of my head, as most of my poetry is, and it was pretty much love at first sight, and it was wonderful.  thank you

 

 
Inkspired said...
May 31, 2009 at 11:12 pm
Very nice poem, I love the idea and it was well written. I liked your word usage. Awesome! (by the way, thanks for the comments).
 
windswift This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 5:05 pm

thanks for the comment, its not an idea though, its the truth, see you later

 

 
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