worth living

May 25, 2009
By windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.


you wormed your way inside,
waking part of me for the ride,
i never felt this way before,
until i felt you at my hearts door.
why cant you look my way,
and see that im hear to stay,
i would never leave your side,
and my love would never again hide.
without you i will close myself,
and put my heart high on a shelf,
never to be touched again,
for if one true love i cant win,
then mylifesno longer worth living,
so to you all my love im giving.


The author's comments:
i met the one person i feel that i cant live without just three days ago. tonight is the first night that ive been away from her since meeting her. i cant sleep tonight, so thats how this poem was born. my heart was healed three days ago.

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on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:15 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

thank you, it was something off the top of my head, as most of my poetry is, and it was pretty much love at first sight, and it was wonderful.  thank you

 


Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 4:22 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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love at first sight. Quite rare within our generation. Even so i like way it flows

 


on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:05 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

thanks for the comment, its not an idea though, its the truth, see you later

 


on May. 31 2009 at 11:12 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Very nice poem, I love the idea and it was well written. I liked your word usage. Awesome! (by the way, thanks for the comments).




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