The Break Up

May 22, 2009
By CherryCoke SILVER, Atherton, California
CherryCoke SILVER, Atherton, California
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The rawness of her humanity,
The futile heart.
The glistening hatred
Harsh tears
That torture her face
With their deep honesty
So that no human eye can avert
From the naivete of that grace.
100 kisses,
100 tender words falsely said in a moment,
Yet made real by her belief,
Reflected in the surreal curve of her heartbroken lips.

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on Jun. 11 2009 at 11:54 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! This is very good! It is....Oh I can't find the words to say about this one. Good job!

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