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Blinking

May 21, 2009
By Kait.Rose BRONZE, Mitchell, Nebraska
Kait.Rose BRONZE, Mitchell, Nebraska
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When I close my eyes all I see is you, scared, everything spinning too fast, a blur.

When I open my eyes, I am scared, everything spinning too fast, a blur.

When I close my eyes all I hear is brakes hit the floor and the tires coming to a painfully slow stop.

When I open my eyes all I hear is my heart hit the floor and my breathing come to a pinfully slow stop.

The author's comments:
This is how I feel. My boyfriend, who passed away earlier this year, inspired me to do this. He was a writer of short stories. I never got why he would write, I think I do now. TO have someone listen.

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