May 18, 2009
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You make me feel so alive
My words cannot express
And for your love i shall strive
These feelings can never recess

You are always on my mind
blind love is my connection
the way you speak is always kind
and every word drips prefection

I can't imagine what i have set
you glow like stars so bright
and though i fear i can't regret
for your love i will fight

All that you are is all i need
with not a flaw upon your face
and you like poetry, what shall i read
and all the day you live in grace

Because in my heart you found your place
and if i were smart i would be true
i am forever in love with you.

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Anjo! said...
May 26, 2009 at 2:54 am
Lovin' it. =P Awesome.
Tonya J. said...
May 25, 2009 at 8:24 pm
wow. I love the way it flows together so nicely. The rythm is perfect!
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 7:11 pm
I really love this! The way it's worded, the way it sounds, AWESOME! I feel like this too.
amyxu said...
May 22, 2009 at 7:24 pm
I was browsing Teen Ink. There's an excellent sense of rhythm and flow throughout the poem. I'm not sure about the title...but the math symbol definitely caught my attention. Nice job!
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