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<3

May 18, 2009
By Taylor Heidenreich BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
Taylor Heidenreich BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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You make me feel so alive
My words cannot express
And for your love i shall strive
These feelings can never recess

You are always on my mind
blind love is my connection
the way you speak is always kind
and every word drips prefection

I can't imagine what i have set
you glow like stars so bright
and though i fear i can't regret
for your love i will fight

All that you are is all i need
with not a flaw upon your face
and you like poetry, what shall i read
and all the day you live in grace

Because in my heart you found your place
and if i were smart i would be true
i am forever in love with you.


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Anjo! SILVER said...
on May. 26 2009 at 2:54 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Lovin' it. =P Awesome.

on May. 25 2009 at 8:24 pm
Tonya Johnson, Springhill, Florida
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wow. I love the way it flows together so nicely. The rythm is perfect!

on May. 23 2009 at 7:11 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I really love this! The way it's worded, the way it sounds, AWESOME! I feel like this too.

amyxu said...
on May. 22 2009 at 7:24 pm
I was browsing Teen Ink. There's an excellent sense of rhythm and flow throughout the poem. I'm not sure about the title...but the math symbol definitely caught my attention. Nice job!