May 18, 2009
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We didn’t have to
Run away. I just needed to know
You would come.

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amyxu said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 3:09 pm
Hey I like your poem. At first I thought it was a haiku because there were five syllables in the first line. So what's the California part about? It's where they're running away, right? Anyway, good job!
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 4:23 pm
Short and sweet! With a lot of meaning! Good job!
jasmine12 said...
May 25, 2009 at 2:22 am
I really like your piece it says so much in so few of words. its awesome =)
HaleyHoneySuckle said...
May 25, 2009 at 12:05 am
awwh. ^,^ cute. cute.
Callie D. said...
May 24, 2009 at 6:19 pm
i really really like this good work :)
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