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We didn’t have to
Run away. I just needed to know
You would come.



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amyxu said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 3:09 pm:
Hey I like your poem. At first I thought it was a haiku because there were five syllables in the first line. So what's the California part about? It's where they're running away, right? Anyway, good job!
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 4:23 pm:
Short and sweet! With a lot of meaning! Good job!
 
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jasmine12 said...
May 25, 2009 at 2:22 am:
I really like your piece it says so much in so few of words. its awesome =)
 
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HaleyHoneySuckle said...
May 25, 2009 at 12:05 am:
awwh. ^,^ cute. cute.
 
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Callie D. said...
May 24, 2009 at 6:19 pm:
i really really like this good work :)
 
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