California

May 18, 2009
By LittlestBird GOLD, North Bay, Other
LittlestBird GOLD, North Bay, Other
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We didn’t have to
Run away. I just needed to know
You would come.


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amyxu said...
on Jul. 1 2009 at 3:09 pm
Hey I like your poem. At first I thought it was a haiku because there were five syllables in the first line. So what's the California part about? It's where they're running away, right? Anyway, good job!

on May. 29 2009 at 4:23 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Short and sweet! With a lot of meaning! Good job!

on May. 25 2009 at 2:22 am
jasmine12 BRONZE, McMinnville, Oregon
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I really like your piece it says so much in so few of words. its awesome =)

on May. 25 2009 at 12:05 am
awwh. ^,^ cute. cute.

Calcow BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2009 at 6:19 pm
Calcow BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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i really really like this good work :)




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