We didn’t have to
Run away. I just needed to know
You would come.
Run away. I just needed to know
You would come.
amyxu said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 3:09 pm:
Jul. 1, 2009 at 3:09 pm:
Hey I like your poem. At first I thought it was a haiku because there were five syllables in the first line. So what's the California part about? It's where they're running away, right? Anyway, good job!
lovehate29
Short and sweet! With a lot of meaning! Good job!
jasmine12I really like your piece it says so much in so few of words. its awesome =)
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