Nightmare

May 16, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


I lay in my bed
And rest my eyes to sleep
Chills overhead
The voices begin to weep

Weeping in the faint sound of a siren
Ringing like bells on a cocktail ring
Lingering above;unknown to be seen
The witch riding backs of Frightened Fiends.

Wake as you try, but she holds on tight
Speak as you like, but she's done such fright
Scream as you would, only a whisper to the night
The witch is there, but out of line sight

Cry, wish you could, but the tears never roll
Rise, as you attempt, but prison is your hold
Struggle for time;She had her turn
Release is now, when your ears burn

Rupture is your body, as the ride is over
Silent is the air, but you tend to speak.
Rise is your body; the hands are gone
Cry are your eyes,as sobs turns to moans



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on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:50 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

ooo i really like this. its so eerie in a way, ya knoww?? awesome job, keep it up!!

on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:18 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Sure thing.

on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:00 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I love this poem! Could you maybe look at my poetry?

on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:11 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thanks so much!

on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:35 pm
crazyforchrist GOLD, Sidney, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
1 timothy 4:12 Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in life, in love, in faith and in purity.

This was really good. Very creative. On some parts it made me stop and think about what you were illustrating because I was truly interested. I believe that is what made it stand out to me. keep it up :)

on Apr. 7 2010 at 12:44 pm
RonCame1993 SILVER, Farmington Hills, Michigan
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I'm weird, what's normal?
Gullible isn't in the dictionary... (sad face)

Wow that was really good! Nice job.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 12:53 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thank you.

Infinityman said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 9:47 pm
this is rather good

on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:58 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

wow!! this is really good!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:48 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thanks a lot!

on Apr. 4 2010 at 9:14 pm
robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The opportunities in life are that which takes us away from normality.

WOW, nice poem, it flows so well. Great Job 

on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:04 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Oh no. Please dnt be jealous. I bet you are a fantastic poet already. But thank you. I will check out your work.

bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 7:08 pm
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.

I am deeply jealous of your skills as a poet. Please keep wring, and maybe read and comment on my work, so i can be a fantastic poet too.

on Feb. 12 2010 at 9:26 pm
Crying_Tears SILVER, SL,UT, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
I am fond on pigs.
Dogs look up to us.
Cats look down.
Pigs treat us as equals.
-Winston Churchill

It's...nostaligic in a really sick and horrific kind of way.

It makes me think of all those nightmares i had when i was little.

I love it :)

on Feb. 1 2010 at 6:11 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

whoa. this is one of the most powerful articlez ive read on here. awesome job plz keep writing!

on Jan. 31 2010 at 6:17 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

oh my gosh. this was so powerful. and kinda haunting. the rhyme scheme was different, but that added to the poem a lot.

on Jan. 12 2010 at 11:06 pm
katie_bugg GOLD, Scott Depot, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"But my heart, it is brighter than all the many stars in the sky"









-Edgar Allan Poe

Thanks for the comment! I really love this i can't even express in words how much i do. haha. Great job, you have an amazing talent never stop. :)

on Jan. 7 2010 at 3:21 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Wow... This one is as good as the other. You're a very deep writer. I'm impressed and love your work!

on Dec. 11 2009 at 4:08 pm
LaLaLa<3 SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none." William Shakespeare

we'll you're good so keep at it:)

on Dec. 11 2009 at 3:13 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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keep writing :)


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